I would like to be told
When the book’s closed
In a whisper to unfold
Real naked and bold
Sinister, Unopposed
Industrial and cold
Tin capped and rolled
She steps appalled
To call me off and I
Am floored and sigh
You my lady are
A car! Oh yes a car!
But you ain’t getting far
Without me, cause I…
Well it’s a dark night
and I… am a headlight.
I love the simplicity of this poem! Straight foreword but effective šš
Thank you Sophie. If nothing more, it did effectively entertain the lady it was written for so I’d agree with you on that.
I genuinely really liked it. I am not keen on poems which are overly complex.
I am glad you did. And congratulations on ‘Kith and Kin’ Best Wishes.
Thank you! šš