Quiet evenings I’d spend
Contemplating everything
By the front window
By the Old Silver Oak
And there was a bird. 

He’d color my gray whispers
with his song of a warm summer
And we’d listen carefully carefree
Me and his lover for the season and
Sometimes my lover for the season.

It was a happy song too.
But as the summer’d start fading
Some notes refused to smile anymore
Only deepening and darkening.
This loss did make me weep
Cold winter brought along
His beautiful song too
But in my dreams
Only.

9 responses to “The Robin”

  1. Rising Hawk Avatar
    Rising Hawk

    Wonderful 🙂

    1. Prashant Nawani Avatar
      Prashant Nawani

      Thanks

  2. a magic moment with holly Avatar

    Dear Prashant,
    I like your poem only our robin here in New England mates for life so speaking of the season does not work.

    1. Prashant Nawani Avatar
      Prashant Nawani

      Hahaha. I am glad you liked my poem and I hope you forgive my ignorance.

  3. P.Romero Avatar

    I, on the other hand, immediately connected to your poem, as the bird lover I am. Robins breed all year long here in the UK, yes, and could live longer, no doubt, but their life span in the wild is just thirteen months (mainly because of predators like cats and human activity… so it is likely that a robin you heard singing in the summer will not be the same robin you will hear singing in the spring). In addition, it is precisely now, when the summer starts saying its good-byes, that robins (and most birds) hide and become quite because they moult, and this makes them fragile and prone to being attacked by their predators, so they hide and don’t sing as often or as loud. So your poem works. But it simply works, Prashant, because the birds of poetry have no obligation to follow the natural rules the birds of biology do: that is our poetic licence.

    Thank you for your generosity.

    1. Prashant Nawani Avatar
      Prashant Nawani

      Thank you Mr. Romero. It actually is good to know that the poem works both ways. Cheers to all Robins all around the world…and to all birds…and to bird lovers…and to poets…

      1. Prashant Nawani Avatar
        Prashant Nawani

        Oops. Sorry about the ‘Mr.’

  4. Veena Avatar

    Color grey whispers .wonderful expression. The poem is very beautiful.

    1. Prashant Nawani Avatar
      Prashant Nawani

      Beauty is in the eye of the beholder they say… I think I agree…

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